[Request/Offer] Feedback Thread

[Con T.]

No, but do you want to do feedback for feedback? I'll put you into my next batch.

Works for me, got you after Logan

 

[K Web V3]

Got you by tomorrow night.

Sweet. I'll have yours up sometime tonight.

Can prolly knock out 3-4 others if ppl want

 

[Bernkastel]

Sweet. I'll have yours up sometime tonight.

Can prolly knock out 3-4 others if ppl want

I've owed you feedback since last cycle, and I was planning on reviewing your LL RP anyway's since you PM'ed me about it.

 

[Dave]

Giving feedback is problematic for me for obvious reasons. That said, I'll go ahead and rep anyone who gives feedback to anyone this round. Not me, just anyone.

 

[Lee]

Please.

I'll get feedback done in the next day or two.

 

[FunKay the Inevitable]

Please.

I'll get feedback done in the next day or two.

The same with me I'm afraid. I'm looking to do feedback for everyone and rep naturally comes to those who feedback me good self.

 

[K Web V3]

I'll have some up tonight, would've already had sum, but son thought it'd be fun to play in the litter box....

 

[red ass skull muhfukkah]

Will do fb for fb as well. Reading through the RPs now. A little warning though: I honestly don't read most RPs so for the most part it will be my first time reading or the first time in a while.

 

[Con T.]

Will do fb for fb as well. Reading through the RPs now. A little warning though: I honestly don't read most RPs so for the most part it will be my first time reading or the first time in a while.

Got you, homey.

I've read yours now, so the list will look like

Alhazred
Vee
Kagura
Titus
Abel

Am I missing anyone?

Yes, I missed Constantine, who I got for tomorrow.

 

[Con T.]

I forgot Logan, just realized

 

[Spidey Revivey]

You can count me if ya like, Haiku. I owe NSL feedback here shortly too.

 

[Con T.]

You can count me if ya like, Haiku. I owe NSL feedback here shortly too.

I'll include you too brother, gonna try and get as many I can done tonight.

 

[Bernkastel]

Will do fb for fb as well. Reading through the RPs now. A little warning though: I honestly don't read most RPs so for the most part it will be my first time reading or the first time in a while.

I will get you tomorrow Skully.

 

[Shotaro]

I will take any and all feedback. I am terrible at returning the favour so if I forget just PM me.

 

[Con T.]

I got you, tomorrow night Shotaro. Though I think you might owe me from last round.

 

[Showtime]

I'll include you too brother, gonna try and get as many I can done tonight.

I like your feedback. You got a very good perceptive. I wouldn't mind reading some feedback from you. I'd be happy to get off my ass and give you some feedback if you give me some.

 

[Con T.]

I like your feedback. You got a very good perceptive. I wouldn't mind reading some feedback from you. I'd be happy to get off my ass and give you some feedback if you give me some.

Will tomorrow work?

For now, I can give you that you tried for something dramatically different, with your RP. I both love it, and i have absolutely zero idea how creative would look at it. By chance, did you happen to be watching a certain episode of the Simpsons, before writing this RP?

 

[NSL]

Got you, homey.

I've read yours now, so the list will look like

Alhazred
Vee
Kagura
Titus
Abel

Am I missing anyone?

Yes, I missed Constantine, who I got for tomorrow.

I gave feedback to everyone. Need I ask? lol

EDIT: Nevermind

 

[Showtime]

Will tomorrow work?

For now, I can give you that you tried for something dramatically different, with your RP. I both love it, and i have absolutely zero idea how creative would look at it. By chance, did you happen to be watching a certain episode of the Simpsons, before writing this RP?

Tomorrow would work.

I'm a big Simpons fan, but no I can't think of the episode that you're talking about. The idea just came to me. I was writing this long serious RP when I decided to scrap it and I thought, this would be a fun idea to write for a RP.

 

[Con T.]

So, in the interest of time, I'm going to instead of doing a list of feedback and going in order, I'm going to look for who's online, and write their feedback for them, so that they can see immediately.

I just finished K Web V3, and am working on Lee's now

 

[K Web V3]

I just finished K Web V3, and am working on Lee's now

Thanks for the feedback. I like how you give feedback in general, You're feedback is always very helpful, and it shows the time you took reading the users rp when u then critique it.

I'm typing up urs atm, and then I'll do a few more . got too comfy last night n fell asleep watching Clint Eastwood westerns lol

 

[Con T.]

I'm more a True Grit man myself, but totally understand, and glad it helped!

So is anyone else online that asked for FB? If not, I'll go ahead with Vee

 

[Showtime]

I've been on and off, but there's no rush to get to me. I haven't had the chance to read your RP yet.

 

[K Web V3]

i got a couple feedbacks up. Zeus, Doe and Abel. Ill try n do some more later on.

i feel my feedback pales in comparison to some others, but i did just pop the feedback cherry so yea lol

 

[Con T.]

By the way, Showtime, just an addendum to my feedback:

I feel like if the liquor store gag was stretched out, and not back to back to back to back to back, it could have been great. Maybe with each time, Noah grows more suspicious of the alcohol, before finally drinking and blacking out. Maybe even with the final "scene" Noah pours some alcohol and just passes out in the locker room. Something like that would have been really damn funny.

Also, thanks K Wen 3V! Really appreciate it, and it does help quite a bit brother.