Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
Who wants some feedback this weekend? I'll do some for any of you who give me some.
[Request/Offer] Feedback Thread
- Thread starter Kermit
- Start date
I'll take some. I'm not sure how helpful I'd be feedback-wise though since I am still new. Will you do it for rep? Mine are worth a lot (someone told me a couple of days ago they are +18 at the moment) so I do not mind offering it in return.
Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
I know nothing at all about Dungeons & Dragons or whatever game your gimmick is based around but i'll attempt to give some. Would rather feedback than rep honestly but rep is fine as well.
Dan Severn's Moustache
Patent Pending
Corvus
Zeus
Hunter
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Sexton
Howard
Daggershield
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Saboteur
Bob
Beard
That's how I'm doing my feedback. Anyone want to jump on the wagon?
Zeus
Hunter
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Sexton
Howard
Daggershield
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Saboteur
Bob
Beard
That's how I'm doing my feedback. Anyone want to jump on the wagon?
I am still interested in receiving some more feedback, if anyone is up for it.
How about this round then?
I believe you still owe me some, are you still up for it?
As for everybody else, I would appreciate some feedback this round, I'll take what anyone says into consideration. I tried to improve upon what I did last round without it being as long. I'll rep for you it unless you'd rather I give you feedback in return. With my still being new I might not be as much help but I am willing to give it a try now that I've been in for a few rounds.
So, here's the deal; I still owe a lot of feedback to my tournament panel; here's what I'm going to do. Starting tomorrow. I'm going I break down the cycle, where I felt you succeeded the most, and what needed work. I'll say what skills stood out most, and which was RP I felt was most flawed (and why)
As for this round, I'll get Dagger. Anyone else want some?
As for this round, I'll get Dagger. Anyone else want some?
Infinity
Starving (Martial) Artist
Dags, I'll shoot you some feedback this round again. It's the least I can do.
Definitely wanna know what you thought about this one. Plus, you should enjoy your little cameo as well.
I'd love FB from anybody willing to read that thing. It ended up being longer than I wanted it to be... and I toyed with the notion of cutting out the last part where Vega actually cuts a promo... kinda... but decided to leave it in. It felt integral to me, but who knows. I'll do the usual fb for fb if anyone is up for it.
& Blade, I promise... I got you this round!
Oh, and if anybody is wondering, I asked for permission before writing all the cameos in my RP.
Definitely wanna know what you thought about this one. Plus, you should enjoy your little cameo as well.
I'd love FB from anybody willing to read that thing. It ended up being longer than I wanted it to be... and I toyed with the notion of cutting out the last part where Vega actually cuts a promo... kinda... but decided to leave it in. It felt integral to me, but who knows. I'll do the usual fb for fb if anyone is up for it.
& Blade, I promise... I got you this round!
Oh, and if anybody is wondering, I asked for permission before writing all the cameos in my RP.
I'll take some if you have the time man.
Skairipa Matrix
3 Time Elite Openweight Champion
If you have anything else to say about my RP (cause I doubt it'll change too much from what you've seen) then sure.
Please!!
Got you two first. Gonna get some actual work done now, and then do Westhoff and Saboteur next
Thriller Ant
Beep Bop Boop
Oui, oui. Technically, Lee asked before Blade, but not before Infinity.
So, here's how I'm gonna do it.
Next:
Saboteur
Westhoff
Vega
After:
Yaz
Celeste
Titus
Then:
Bob
Bobby Adams
Warren
Then:
Hunter
Blade
Am I missing anyone on my panel?
Dan Severn's Moustache
Patent Pending
Fuck it, I'll jump on the bandwagon.
I was actually gonna get ya anway; just wanted to wait to see if you wanted it.
You'll be with Blade and Hunter
