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[Request/Offer] Feedback Thread

NSL would like some feedback for his latest RP.

He can't give anyone feedback until Saturday what with work and all though.
 
I have a juicy 12 points of rep (maybe, I'm not quite sure anymore) to offer to anyone that gives me feedback.
 
I too will be offering rep for feedback, as well as a nice compliment to brighten your day.
 
Yeah, you're going to have to wait for the feedback guys. My internet/iPad ate the post I was making. I'll rewrite it later.
 
I don't want feedback, but felt it necessary to ask:

Justin Cooper – First thing I noticed was that you are trying something new in order to stop this losing streak. I like the silence and it can open up some windows for future RPs. I don’t like Cooper calling Leon, Mr. Kensworth. I feel you are also going on some type of face thing with the line of “ I respect the business”. The shot at KC line was a tad too much.

Triple X- Be careful with wording. I like how you do have a good a grasp on your character. I don’t think you needed the two different day thing, but it still worked. Nothing really major that I had a problem (execpt than the 2 day thing.)

What the fuck?
 

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