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Well first of all the whole capitalization thing without the lack of punctuation is distracting. I get that it's supposed to sound all tough and edgy but dude, you're not a 10 year old that is trying to write a Young Authors book involving The Jeffersons, Hulk Hogan and chimichangs. Second the period just before it and the bad structure isn't working.
Rating: D. They were trying here but dude, just not working for the most part. Also the whole wrong thread thing is something you have to avoid if you're wanting to be taken seriously as a major poster, which Norcal is. Not bad, but nothing I'm going to remember in about an hour, which isn't a good sign.
Well first of all the whole capitalization thing without the lack of punctuation is distracting. I get that it's supposed to sound all tough and edgy but dude, you're not a 10 year old that is trying to write a Young Authors book involving The Jeffersons, Hulk Hogan and chimichangs. Second the period just before it and the bad structure isn't working.
Rating: D. They were trying here but dude, just not working for the most part. Also the whole wrong thread thing is something you have to avoid if you're wanting to be taken seriously as a major poster, which Norcal is. Not bad, but nothing I'm going to remember in about an hour, which isn't a good sign.