My new commentary for Black Ops

[StopIt]

Well I just made a commentary/gameplay for black ops. Can you guys tell me if its good or not and tell me how to improve?
Well I just made a new commentary for Black ops. Can you guys tell me if I did good or not? and what I can approve on?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e-qsefuRCIw&feature=channel_video_title

 

[StopIt]

Ahh. I don't know what I was doing when I posted the 2nd line. Can't edit..

 

[ammyspears]

Well I just made a commentary/gameplay for black ops. Can you guys tell me if its good or not and tell me how to improve?
Well I just made a new commentary for Black ops. Can you guys tell me if I did good or not? and what I can approve on?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e-qsefuRCIw&feature=channel_video_title

Yeah that,s cool.
But u just have to improve ur voice little bit.
Talk about more & more things in videos.


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[911 JP]

Yea I enjoyed the commentary, this seemed like you were advertising youre commentarys which is all well and good, though in future videos you should talk about the game and gameplay, like you were doing when you were talking about the Famas.

Only Criticism is the use of the words Y'all and um, but its you and because its youre first video Im sure you will improve, not really a Criticism more an observation.

All in all a great vid / commentary and I will deffinately be checking your channel for more commentarys. (PS would love to see one of MW2)

 

[911 JP]

Damn, dont know what happened with this post?!?!