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So, Falkon has his F20, but I've never seen it. Feller is playing Last of Us; I can understand why that would take up his time. So, as I see it, Falkon's list is a top twenty, based on past performance. I want to write my Fab Five, based on a week to week basis. Note; this list will change dramatically from week to week. You could be #1 one week, and not even on my list the next. That's perfectly fine; you should expect that. It's rare someone cranks out top five stuff each and every week. But for now, I'd like to focus on my favorite five RPs, and explain what made these RPs so good.
If your name isn't on the list... You should probably die in a well.
No, not really. Just take note. And remember, this is a pretty subjective list. So let's do it.
Week 1: 6/20/2013
5. Blade- I'm going to be perfectly honest; I thought I was losing this week, I really did. I absolutely loved the dialogue of your characters this round. I think it was quick, it was fun to read, but more than anything else, it got over the characters. Stacy was written perfectly during her interview, so was Blade. In fact, there's something I want to talk about now; writing NPC characters. This week in the discussion thread, someone talked about how to write an NPC, and if they felt they relied too much on NPCs for their RPs. My feeling is, if you feel like there are too many, it probably means you didn't fully get what you were aiming for. Blade used three NPCs, and it never felt like too much?
Why? Because he knew the characters, he knew their tendencies, and knew what each character would act like. If you ever wanted to see what writing an NPC should be like, re-read Blade's. It may seem like a small thing, but to me, it's bigger than you can imagine.
4. Krypto- I said this to the guy earlier, but I think he has the best grasp on what his character wants, and how to get it. This is the perfect way to take a guy that's supposedly low card, and make it into a guy that gets significant air time on tv every week.
The work of Dr. Alhazred can't be ignored either, and I'm doing it an injustice if I would. But the thing you can learn most about Krypto's character is making an unbelievable character seem real. Krypto does that, and Dr. Alhazred has given him so much to work with. But the one skill that I think you should look for in Krypto's RP from this week was his ability to use word play. Note the use of "Mister" the cat in his RP. Dynamite was able to not just introduce a plot point, and important one for his match, but he also used one in which could add plenty of jokes to it. From the "Mister was my father" gag, to the pussy jokes, Dynamite's word play made his RP stand out even more.
3 & 2. Saxoteur- I'm going to cheat on this one, I apologize, but Saxoteur's tandem RP is really phenomenal. How good is it? Well, I categorize it as one sole RP, because both Jglass and Doctor are able to pick up where the other one leaves off. The format is one that works for me; I'm not saying all teams should do what they do, but I will say that it makes it so I have to read and pay attention to both, and sometimes that's hard for tag team RPs. I don't know how to do it, and I'm not sure I'll know how to.
I'm not sure who it was that added Chinese script to their RP, so since it was Jglass', I'll assume it was. That's the kind of thing that, to me, adds a whole layer of interaction to the RP. It's little details like that, which make it so engaging to read. Maybe it eventually got to stereotypes, but it wasn't maliciously done, which frankly is a hard thing to do.
Doc, on the other hand, took a lighthearted character, and actually was able to use a nice change of pace to write a somewhat serious pace. Guys, I may talk about this a lot, so I want to talk about changes of pace. When used correctly, it can be refreshing, and can refresh your writing style. As long as you don't stray too far from your writing style (Doctor didn't), it adds a very nice touch to your character, and adds some depth.
1. Celeste-Earlier today, I pm'ed Ech and told him I see his RP's as the best right now. He seemed a little stunned, but there's a descriptive writing to his, that works for Celeste.
Shotaro said it in a podcast, but Celeste isn't a concise talker. She shouldn't be; Celeste's way of talking works for her, as is. His descriptive writing really puts me into the setting, which all RPs should do. I really do believe that writing is a visual craft; we write something, in the hopes of giving our readers a certain image. I feel no one does it quite like Crimson does. It sets the scene; I feel as if I'm there. Granted, not always the best thing during a Regal-Kaitlyn sex session. But at the end of the day, we're role players. Our whole concept is to write a story, so that even while not being there, you feel like you are there. And that is Celeste Crimson, to me.
Also worth noting; look at the way he writes.
Look at how... Bright it sounds. It adds to the character. And frankly, I can imagine Celeste having this thought process. Celeste knows what she wants, and Echelon knows how to write it.
Wanna add something? Don't agree? Wanna point something? Well, feel free to offer your own Fab Five. I'll keep this up... well, 'til I get bored.
So, Falkon has his F20, but I've never seen it. Feller is playing Last of Us; I can understand why that would take up his time. So, as I see it, Falkon's list is a top twenty, based on past performance. I want to write my Fab Five, based on a week to week basis. Note; this list will change dramatically from week to week. You could be #1 one week, and not even on my list the next. That's perfectly fine; you should expect that. It's rare someone cranks out top five stuff each and every week. But for now, I'd like to focus on my favorite five RPs, and explain what made these RPs so good.
If your name isn't on the list... You should probably die in a well.
No, not really. Just take note. And remember, this is a pretty subjective list. So let's do it.
Week 1: 6/20/2013
5. Blade- I'm going to be perfectly honest; I thought I was losing this week, I really did. I absolutely loved the dialogue of your characters this round. I think it was quick, it was fun to read, but more than anything else, it got over the characters. Stacy was written perfectly during her interview, so was Blade. In fact, there's something I want to talk about now; writing NPC characters. This week in the discussion thread, someone talked about how to write an NPC, and if they felt they relied too much on NPCs for their RPs. My feeling is, if you feel like there are too many, it probably means you didn't fully get what you were aiming for. Blade used three NPCs, and it never felt like too much?
Why? Because he knew the characters, he knew their tendencies, and knew what each character would act like. If you ever wanted to see what writing an NPC should be like, re-read Blade's. It may seem like a small thing, but to me, it's bigger than you can imagine.
4. Krypto- I said this to the guy earlier, but I think he has the best grasp on what his character wants, and how to get it. This is the perfect way to take a guy that's supposedly low card, and make it into a guy that gets significant air time on tv every week.
The work of Dr. Alhazred can't be ignored either, and I'm doing it an injustice if I would. But the thing you can learn most about Krypto's character is making an unbelievable character seem real. Krypto does that, and Dr. Alhazred has given him so much to work with. But the one skill that I think you should look for in Krypto's RP from this week was his ability to use word play. Note the use of "Mister" the cat in his RP. Dynamite was able to not just introduce a plot point, and important one for his match, but he also used one in which could add plenty of jokes to it. From the "Mister was my father" gag, to the pussy jokes, Dynamite's word play made his RP stand out even more.
3 & 2. Saxoteur- I'm going to cheat on this one, I apologize, but Saxoteur's tandem RP is really phenomenal. How good is it? Well, I categorize it as one sole RP, because both Jglass and Doctor are able to pick up where the other one leaves off. The format is one that works for me; I'm not saying all teams should do what they do, but I will say that it makes it so I have to read and pay attention to both, and sometimes that's hard for tag team RPs. I don't know how to do it, and I'm not sure I'll know how to.
I'm not sure who it was that added Chinese script to their RP, so since it was Jglass', I'll assume it was. That's the kind of thing that, to me, adds a whole layer of interaction to the RP. It's little details like that, which make it so engaging to read. Maybe it eventually got to stereotypes, but it wasn't maliciously done, which frankly is a hard thing to do.
Doc, on the other hand, took a lighthearted character, and actually was able to use a nice change of pace to write a somewhat serious pace. Guys, I may talk about this a lot, so I want to talk about changes of pace. When used correctly, it can be refreshing, and can refresh your writing style. As long as you don't stray too far from your writing style (Doctor didn't), it adds a very nice touch to your character, and adds some depth.
1. Celeste-Earlier today, I pm'ed Ech and told him I see his RP's as the best right now. He seemed a little stunned, but there's a descriptive writing to his, that works for Celeste.
Shotaro said it in a podcast, but Celeste isn't a concise talker. She shouldn't be; Celeste's way of talking works for her, as is. His descriptive writing really puts me into the setting, which all RPs should do. I really do believe that writing is a visual craft; we write something, in the hopes of giving our readers a certain image. I feel no one does it quite like Crimson does. It sets the scene; I feel as if I'm there. Granted, not always the best thing during a Regal-Kaitlyn sex session. But at the end of the day, we're role players. Our whole concept is to write a story, so that even while not being there, you feel like you are there. And that is Celeste Crimson, to me.
Also worth noting; look at the way he writes.
I smiled brightly. It was my first gift, and a token of his love and admiration. Yes, my king. A thousand times yes. No price was too steep, for our love knew no bounds. I already had a place for it in the manor. I pictured it above the fireplace in the center of the mantle; the stone walls cradling it as soft light illuminated it from both sides. So that every time I saw it as I walked into the living room I would be reminded of what was really important. We continued to tour the gallery; it had everything from surrealism to modernism to impressionism to abstract. We stepped inside a room that was filled with many sculptures; most of them were metal and were twisted and deformed into different shapes and patterns. Holmes walked up to one piece in particular to take another look; it looked like an aluminum and chrome alloyed star with melting appendages.
Look at how... Bright it sounds. It adds to the character. And frankly, I can imagine Celeste having this thought process. Celeste knows what she wants, and Echelon knows how to write it.
Wanna add something? Don't agree? Wanna point something? Well, feel free to offer your own Fab Five. I'll keep this up... well, 'til I get bored.