My Personal Titantrons

[Paul Bunyan's Axe]

These are some Titantrons I've been making for an E-Fed on another forum, thought I'd post them here and get you guys' thoughts and/or criticism of them. Keep in mind, I'm not picking the music for these, the Efedder's theme is what plays on the Tron, so if you criticize anything, it can't be the music

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fvjQ1tKhZKY[/YOUTUBE]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66hlRSW-lUM[/YOUTUBE]

The videos aren't appearing for me for some reason. So if it's the same for you guys, here's the links

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fvjQ1tKhZKY

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66hlRSW-lUM

I'll upload all the Trons I make into this thread so you guys can give me any feedback or suggestions.