Come on people!

[SavageTaker]

Go read my Book This!

http://forums.wrestlezone.com/showthread.php?p=1038249#post1038249

I want to hear what you guys think whether it be good or bad. i want to see how i can improve.

 

[Crush1]

Go read my Book This!

http://forums.wrestlezone.com/showthread.php?p=1038249#post1038249

I want to hear what you guys think whether it be good or bad. i want to see how i can improve.

the world is made of hurt, and that people either get hurt, or control the hurt, and those who control the hurt inflict it upon the weak.

 

[SavageTaker]

Umm...Ok.

 

[Hyorinmaru]

Don't mind him S.T. he's insane,

 

[SavageTaker]

ok. i noticed that lol.

 

[Miko]

I'll read when I sober up

 

[48.7 is Approximately 49 Times Better Than You]

It's not bad. The writing is a bit choppy at times and what not, but you'll improve as you go. My best product a few months ago, August I think, is horrible as compared to what I can do now. Your skills as a writer just come naturally. I like what you have going. It's good to see activity in BT!

 

[SavageTaker]

what do you mean it is choppy?

and what do you think i should do so the writing isnt as choppy?

 

[Crush1]

what do you mean it is choppy?

and what do you think i should do so the writing isnt as choppy?

Fear clouds the mind and makes you unable to see and analyze you're problems

 

[Miko]

Fear clouds the mind and makes you unable to see and analyze you're problems

yes, yes, YES EXACTLY. . . . . . what you said there.