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Your grasp of the English language could use a lot of improvement. You also don't have anything interesting to say.

I clicked though. So I'm sure you're thrilled.
 
All good man this is the first blog I have ever done so I am winging it.

I guess if I'd have to give more how to improve suggestions I'd say try adding personal flair to it. Make your voice known. Sure you're reviewing but at the same time it's your opinion which means you can write it however you want.

It wasn't a bad piece don't get me wrong, but it just lacked style and creativity, and I'd suggest reading it out.
 
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