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Old 03-16-2017, 09:35 PM
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First off, I really liked the character rap sheet and thought the idea was original. Plus that entrance music fits the wrestler and its a great song. Now, to the RP. We get Lynx in his apartment in AZ watching Aftershock to start out. He's shocked to learn that Theron Daggershield has retired so he's off to WZCW to prevent the apocalypse from happening.

I liked the way the RP started, it's a fresh new character so we don't need ALL the information crammed at us to begin. Keeping some of his motivations on the backburner in the first RP is a good move IMO.

There's some fourth wall breaking and a sprinkle of comedy here and there that kind of reminded me of Theron a little bit. Same with the writing style, if you changed up the movie script format just for your first few words of a new paragraph then it wouldn't seem too much like a Theron RP...the same with that last paragraph. That's just my tinyiest of tiny nitpics but overall it was a good start and looking forward to see what Lynx has in store for WZCW.
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