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Old 03-13-2018, 03:33 PM
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Old 03-15-2018, 05:23 PM
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Old 03-16-2018, 12:19 PM
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Old 03-16-2018, 06:24 PM
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Old 03-16-2018, 08:06 PM
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Old 03-16-2018, 08:46 PM
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Old 03-16-2018, 08:50 PM
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Oh, if you guys, as in anyone, could please do me a personal favor. The WHC was the first match I have written in like a year, I don't need like detailed feedback but if you could let me know how you liked it, it would mean a lot.

I will give some more detailed thoughts over the weekend, but another solid LL in the books. Big ups to creative.
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Old 03-18-2018, 07:49 AM
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Oh, if you guys, as in anyone, could please do me a personal favor. The WHC was the first match I have written in like a year, I don't need like detailed feedback but if you could let me know how you liked it, it would mean a lot.

I will give some more detailed thoughts over the weekend, but another solid LL in the books. Big ups to creative.
It was a great match, super detailed and creative. I loved the submission block to prevent Batti from tapping. I also liked having entrances and pre match ceremonies in Italic, it looks better. Pinfalls , special moves could have been bolded though and signatures at least in Italics. One paragraph has 4 pin falls all non bolded and it just doesn't grab the eye. But those are super minor, cosmetic details that barely take away from the action. I also really like the commentary and (In between move sets) detail added throughout the match. It's always a better read if you have flowing detail instead of - Move, move, move, pin fall attempt. Move, move, assume punches in here somewhere, move, move, assume rest hold here somewhere, move, move....ect ect ect is boring as hell to read but you didn't do that. Couldn't have asked for a better triple threat match Yaz.

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Old 03-18-2018, 09:28 AM
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Personally I'm against the bold for the pins as it makes it easy to spot the ending by mistake.
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Old 03-18-2018, 04:41 PM
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